Comments For "I'm Building...Something", Page 1

On 27/09/2013 at 12:51 GMT Year 4A from Brazil wrote:

"This poem is very good! We liked the rhyming words!"

On 15/05/2013 at 14:51 GMT Vonisaac from Philippines wrote:

"I like this poem and its cool"

On 27/04/2007 at 21:08 GMT Heather from Colorado U.S wrote:

"This poem had a lot of detail in it and also it was a very good poem. It told every thing was very specific and told every thing that happend I also like the way the auther read it to me. That's what I liked about this poem."

On 24/03/2007 at 05:49 GMT La Reina from United States wrote:

"I love this poem it sound like something I would do!"

On 06/03/2007 at 16:31 GMT Nicole from USA wrote:

"It was pretty good. I think that you could do better but it's really good."

On 03/03/2007 at 00:24 GMT Sarah Sheldon from U.S.A. wrote:

"this poem is really FUNNY and Cute"

On 26/02/2007 at 14:14 GMT Rebecca from The Great State/Country Of Michigan wrote:

"I love this! It's sooo cute!"

On 12/02/2007 at 22:20 GMT nathan from scotland wrote:

"i thought your poem was really creative and well said i enjoyed reading it. "

On 31/01/2007 at 15:20 GMT Andy from France wrote:

"it was ok needs some work"

On 04/12/2006 at 23:02 GMT Hayden from U.S.A. wrote:

"This is one of my favorite poems ever. i like the last line the best"

On 24/08/2006 at 05:36 GMT Kaitlin from new zealand wrote:

"i had to read poems for homework and we have to present our favourite poem next week and this is definetly my pick. awarded 5 star by me"

On 06/05/2006 at 22:21 GMT alex simeone from united states wrote:

"Ithought that was a very creative poem"

On 05/05/2006 at 12:25 GMT george from USA wrote:

"This poem is really funny keep up the good work"

On 24/04/2006 at 18:29 GMT Scott F. from Canada wrote:

"I forgot what I was going to say, just kidding, I loved it."

On 18/04/2006 at 23:16 GMT Rachael Mason from wrote:


On 15/04/2006 at 22:36 GMT Mandy from canada wrote:

"I love it. its very funny all my friend thinks its funny,too."

On 02/04/2006 at 16:55 GMT chanel from U.S.A wrote:

"Omg...this poem is funny and jus liek"

On 01/04/2006 at 16:21 GMT Paige Simpson from U.S.A wrote:


On 26/02/2006 at 12:58 GMT Bobbi from USA wrote:

"This poem was funny. I would never put back that stuff. Whoever it belonged to will have to get it."

On 17/01/2006 at 19:47 GMT Alex from USA wrote:

"Funny and very descripove."

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