On 11/02/2007 at 11:20 GMT Muneer Ali from Pakistan wrote:
"this is really marvellous poetry"
On 04/11/2005 at 03:57 GMT Eduardo Lopez from EL salvador wrote:
"I think that poem it is funny but it should have more rhiming words."
On 19/05/2005 at 01:31 GMT Patty Lolly from Turkey wrote:
"I liked it. But I only would give it a 3. A 3 and thats it!! It should rhyme!!! I would give it a 5 if you made it rhyme. I really only like poem that rhyme. I don't know why, I just like think it FLOWS better than poem that don't rhyme. Thats just how I am! G2G B-Bye Now!!!!
P.S.That dude that rights the book THe light in the Attic, Where the Sidwalk Ends And other poem bokks Is much BETTER! (Sorry) "
On 05/05/2005 at 20:06 GMT Lesleigh Meece from USA wrote:
"I think this poems needs more ryming"
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