Comments For "Chocolate Cake", Page 1

On 06/05/2013 at 04:02 GMT Charlotte from New Zealand wrote:

"nice "

On 29/04/2013 at 10:33 GMT archna sankar from india wrote:

"it makes me laugh alot as the chocalate cake went to the cat"

On 24/04/2013 at 18:58 GMT Alexia from Canada wrote:

"This poem makes me hungry"

On 22/04/2013 at 11:32 GMT Shiuli from Canada wrote:

"Nice poem but it is kind of gross when chocolate goes in his/her ears!"

On 08/10/2009 at 11:12 GMT year 3 wheelock primary school from UK wrote:

"We liked this poem because we liked the describing words. It was really funny when the chocolate went over the cat"

On 19/09/2009 at 19:48 GMT Chantalle from Vermont wrote:

"I was drinking milk when I was reading this and all of sudden when I read it I laughed so hard milk came out of my nose!"

On 01/06/2009 at 19:09 GMT Lauren from USA wrote:

"I had to pick a poem to read to my class and I chosies this one because it was so funny and I love COCOLATE CAKE"

On 27/05/2009 at 22:57 GMT kate castillo from pennsylvana wrote:

"I think your poem is chocolately and good"

On 06/05/2009 at 14:24 GMT Marry Saleic from Hollywood,California wrote:

"So Yumilicious!"

On 23/04/2009 at 15:38 GMT luke from us wrote:

"hah hah hah this is so funny 5 stars"

On 24/03/2009 at 19:41 GMT Lauren from U.K wrote:

"I really enjoyed reading it! It made me laugh lots and I had to read it again just for the laugh of it! Please read it!"

On 20/03/2009 at 14:13 GMT sabrina from USA california wrote:

"this is funny and cute"

On 17/03/2009 at 00:13 GMT Tina from USA wrote:

"I felt like I was eating chocolate cake while reading the poem!"

On 08/03/2009 at 16:59 GMT Shola Thomas from England wrote:

"Its a really good and funny poem to read i really enjoyed it."

On 04/03/2009 at 12:01 GMT Kelsey Lane from England, Birmingham wrote:

"I really liked this poem it is the best poem i have ever read ."

On 03/03/2009 at 16:01 GMT ella from uk wrote:

"I love it"

On 03/03/2009 at 10:24 GMT chloe wescott from England wrote:

"This poem was funny and i can tell that you spent a long time on rhyming couplets. Great!"

On 02/03/2009 at 19:22 GMT dallas from oklahoma wrote:

"that was funny :) I like the pic on the side of the pig to. I en joy reading but that made it even more enjoyable. :)))))))))))))))))"

On 12/05/2007 at 14:08 GMT danny from goldsboro wrote:

"this is a great poem i had a great time readin it."

On 27/04/2007 at 21:07 GMT Katie from Colorado,USA wrote:

"I really like this poem because when I read it I just wannted to eat a choclate cake.This poem had lots of good rhyming in it. I gave this poem a five star rate because the author who wrote it did a really good job! "

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