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| "The Rumbles"
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Current Rating:  (3.67) |
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There's Rumbles in my tummy,
How they grizzle, grunt and groan!
They're unhappily residing,
Doing nothing there but moan!
They're grumbling with hunger,
And complaining more and more!
These Rumbles in my tummy,
That I simply can't ignore!
They're building to crescendo,
Getting louder than before!
So I guess I'll have to feed them,
Candy, crisps and choc galore!
©2005 Gareth Lancaster
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On 04/02/2007 at 13:59 GMT,
Amy from not telling wrote:
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i would give it 100% and 10 out of 10
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On 31/01/2007 at 17:44 GMT,
Brooke from U.S. wrote:
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| I thought this poem was really good!! |
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On 27/10/2006 at 12:45 GMT,
robert lewis from USA wrote:
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| the poem was fantastick |
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On 13/10/2006 at 15:00 GMT,
Katy White from England wrote:
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| Very funny and silly but most of all excellent! |
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On 18/03/2006 at 23:57 GMT,
Breanna from Australia wrote:
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| I think it was awsome and cool |
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