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| "I'm Building...Something"
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Current Rating:  (4.04) |
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Bottle tops and rubber bands,
Empty boxes, varied brands.
Plastic tubs and sticky tape,
Last Halloween's black Vampire cape.
Cardboard tubes and burst balloons,
Assorted bent and broken spoons.
Three magazines, my sister's shoes,
(I took them whilst she had a snooze.)
My winter gloves, a paper bag,
A flapping pirate castle flag.
A pot of glue, some old pen tops,
And two of my mum's kitchen mops.
A pile that's twice as high as me,
A diverse heap, as you can see.
I scratch my head as I begin,
What was I going to build again?
©2005 Gareth Lancaster
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On 27/04/2007 at 21:08 GMT,
Heather from Colorado U.S wrote:
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| This poem had a lot of detail in it and also it was a very good poem. It told every thing was very specific and told every thing that happend I also like the way the auther read it to me. That's what I liked about this poem. |
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On 24/03/2007 at 05:49 GMT,
La Reina from United States wrote:
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| I love this poem it sound like something I would do! |
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On 06/03/2007 at 16:31 GMT,
Nicole from USA wrote:
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| It was pretty good. I think that you could do better but it's really good. |
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On 03/03/2007 at 00:24 GMT,
Sarah Sheldon from U.S.A. wrote:
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| this poem is really FUNNY and Cute |
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On 26/02/2007 at 14:14 GMT,
Rebecca from The Great State/Country Of Michigan wrote:
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| I love this! It's sooo cute! |
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