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| "The Super Tilting Hurlacoaster"
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Current Rating:  (3.99) |
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The Super Tilting Hurlacoaster,
Sixty stories high!
A terror ride that's sure to thrill,
And churn up your insides!
With eight gigantic loop-de-loops,
And five, three-mile long dips,
It nose-dives through the tightest bends,
White-knuckles cling the grips!
Through gravity-defying spins,
A total of sixteen,
This palpitating, pitching trip,
Will leave you shades of green!
The Super Tilting Hurlacoaster,
Threw me to and fro,
Now I'm queasy, faint and dizzy,
Can I have another go?
©2005 Gareth Lancaster
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On 23/03/2009 at 13:28 GMT,
thomas handley from england wrote:
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| cool poem, brill ! |
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On 28/03/2007 at 09:07 GMT,
loren and kathryn from england wrote:
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| we found it quite funny |
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On 16/03/2007 at 16:16 GMT,
Leah Prinsloo from South Afrika wrote:
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| This poem is really cool. you should write more like this one. |
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On 01/02/2007 at 14:33 GMT,
Coy from America wrote:
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| It was so cool it made me feel like I was on a rollor coaster. |
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On 31/01/2007 at 20:21 GMT,
Hannah Bunch from USA wrote:
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| I like this poem. It is realy funny! |
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