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"Herbet"
 
Current Rating: Rating: 3.77 (3.77)
Herbet loves his sherbet when it fizzes on his tongue,
Like a million minute people celebrating with a song!
But Herbet loves it too much and he gulps it far too quick,
So it oozes from his ears and nose and leaves him feeling sick!

©2005 Gareth Lancaster
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On 17/01/2007 at 17:34 GMT, evan from ohio wrote:
i liked this poem alot because it was silly. It had long lines but the poem altogether was short.
On 24/11/2006 at 07:23 GMT, ruby from england wrote:
THIS POEM IS GREAT ITS SOO FUNNY !!!
On 27/01/2006 at 21:35 GMT, Lily Fairman from United States wrote:
I think this poem is fairly good. it is fresh and naive without any innapropriate humour. i like the fact that the poet did not overdue their rhyming.
On 29/11/2005 at 19:11 GMT, Louisa from Hong Kong wrote:
This poem is a bit long,but I still like this poem,it is very cute and funny.I rate it for 4 star.
On 15/10/2005 at 22:40 GMT, hannah-louise from england wrote:
quite long lines for a poem but very well structured
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