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| "Takeoff"
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Current Rating:  (3.77) |
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Count commencing
Heart thumping
Arms retracting
Fuel pumping
Engines firing
Rockets roaring
Ground shaking
Lifting, soaring
Heat rising
Shudders pounding
Noisy shaking
Boosters sounding
Slowly upwards
Rising, rushing
Going skywards
Forces crushing
Climbing onwards
Seeking higher
Jets propelling
Silver flyer
Air thinning
Darkness closing
Moving faster
View imposing
Bursting, punching
Space surrounding
Into blackness
Earth...astounding!
©2005 Gareth Lancaster
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On 07/10/2005 at 15:40 GMT,
jessica from usa wrote:
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i dont like it!!!!!
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On 09/07/2005 at 14:19 GMT,
Lakshmi Nair from India wrote:
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| This poem is toooo good, please love this poet's imagination and expression!!! very good. |
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On 01/06/2005 at 02:37 GMT,
Misty from USA wrote:
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| Love this unique poem. Vivid imagery and great design, long and skinny like a rocket. THe best I've read so far. |
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On 06/05/2005 at 02:14 GMT,
NO ONE from NO WHERE wrote:
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| sooooo many lines ohhh (MOANS) so many short words to read man! |
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On 05/05/2005 at 20:20 GMT,
Grayson from U.S. wrote:
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this poem is wierd
but I think it is ok |
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