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| "Spidery Foe"
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Current Rating:  (3.72) |
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There's a spider spinning webs,
From the ceiling to my bed.
It's a silky trick,
He's working quick,
Whilst swinging on his thread.
He's moving with intent,
As he hurries his descent.
He sways around,
Above the ground,
He's here to cause torment!
His yarn he does unwind,
As my teeth begin to grind.
My spidery foe,
Is near my toe,
And then I'll be entwined!
Now an inch is all that's clear,
'Tween the spider and my ear.
I turn his way,
And slowing say,
"Boo!" as he gets near!
The spider, shocked, clings tight,
As his balance goes with fright.
He speeds up high,
I wave bye-bye,
Till we meet again tonight!
©2003 Gareth Lancaster
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On 23/09/2009 at 21:40 GMT,
bunnyrabbit from new zealand wrote:
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| i thought this was a really discriptive poem and it was using your imagination and feelings |
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On 30/04/2009 at 15:06 GMT,
Zach from U.S. wrote:
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| I love all your poems but this is probably my favorite! |
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On 29/04/2009 at 18:14 GMT,
Jake from Egypt wrote:
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| I liked the poem butt Unlike everybody else i like spiders D: |
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On 16/04/2009 at 11:53 GMT,
zara from england wrote:
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| i hate spiders but that rocked i loved it |
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On 29/03/2007 at 16:15 GMT,
james flarity from medicen hat wrote:
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| i like the poem very much spiders are very evil and scary |
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