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| "Man From the Moon"
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Current Rating:  (3.66) |
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There once was a man from the moon,
Who dusted the sky with a broom.
He cleaned it at night,
To keep the lights bright,
And scooped out new stars with a spoon!
©2003 Gareth Lancaster
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On 11/04/2007 at 14:08 GMT,
Melissa Quintrell from Usa wrote:
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| It was a nice poem, but it could have been a little longer then just one paragraph. |
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On 05/04/2007 at 18:59 GMT,
Kiara Wyatt from Goodrich wrote:
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I think that the poem is good and you should make more like that!!!
Love, Kiara Wyatt
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On 28/03/2007 at 09:22 GMT,
Bethan from England wrote:
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| The "Man from the Moon" was not that good because there was only one paragraph which makes it very boring! |
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On 29/01/2007 at 03:52 GMT,
ashley from united states wrote:
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| i was looking for poems for my class project, i ran on to this one and i laughed, just wanted to say your a great poet! i loved it and all your others too! |
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On 29/01/2007 at 03:50 GMT,
ashley from united states wrote:
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| i really like this poem, im on the internet looking for poems for my class project and i found yours, it made me laugh. just wanted to say i think u are a great poet! |
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