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| "Snowball Fights"
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Current Rating:  (3.77) |
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Splosh, that hit me in the face,
Thwack, and in my belly!
Fizz, that took my wooly hat,
And dripped into my wellies!
Whoosh, hehe I got him back,
Oops! But that one's missed!
Now they're coming thick and fast,
Snowy balls as big as fists!
It must be time to call a truce,
Before I'm soaked right through!
My brother's just too good at this,
And my hands are turning blue!
But snowball fights are such good fun,
Even though it's cold and wet!
So just one more and here it goes,
Splat! I got him on his neck!
©2002 Gareth Lancaster
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On 10/04/2007 at 16:17 GMT,
Lily from Britain wrote:
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| Good onomotopia use!!! |
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On 03/04/2007 at 12:55 GMT,
Samantha Fairhead from England wrote:
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| Fantastic Poem |
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On 05/01/2007 at 19:21 GMT,
Matt from England wrote:
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| Great Peom |
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On 19/12/2006 at 03:04 GMT,
Alexandra H. from Greece wrote:
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| I love it! |
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On 11/12/2006 at 20:12 GMT,
alice from country wrote:
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| well good |
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