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| "My Dad's Old Car"
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Current Rating:  (3.95) |
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Rattle, hum, hiss, bang,
This car has got to go!
It really is quite sick,
It huffs and puffs and blows!
Crackle, whizz, cough, wheeze,
I think it's going to stop!
We've just gone round a corner
And the engine fell right off!
©2002 Gareth Lancaster
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On 13/10/2006 at 11:52 GMT,
Angelyn from northern mariana islands wrote:
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| this was so funny! I'd like give it 5 stars! I'd say it's funny because my dad's car is like that,only the engine doesn't fall off. |
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On 09/10/2006 at 18:44 GMT,
thomas buhlman from uk wrote:
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| it was really good |
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On 02/10/2006 at 17:19 GMT,
tabby from england wrote:
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i like this poem because that sometimes
my dads cars do that . |
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On 02/05/2006 at 14:43 GMT,
Ashley from From United States wrote:
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| That is a really cool and funny poem!! |
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On 11/04/2006 at 01:00 GMT,
Brie from United States wrote:
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| This is a really funy poem! My dad's car is just like that! |
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